Here is my new website....
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Your site is very professional looking and I like the pics. Very nice especially the one of the amber bottle, massage stones and what looks like a rosemary sprig. Your choice of scents sound wonderful. I was also impressed that you filled in an "About Us" section and included a picture. I distrust sites that don't have info under the "About Us" section. Of course, this is just me. Maybe other people don't care. The picture is a good touch because it makes me feel like I'd be ordering from a "real" person and not an anonymous source.
Please don't be offended by my nitpicking of your site. I just wanted to point out a few things I noticed. But again, maybe other people don't notice these things.
I noticed some misspellings - irritation and approved. I think "Approved" and "All" should be lower case.
This is just a suggestion. Eliminate the exclamation point after Welcome. It’s redundant since you end the sentence with an exclamation point. Maybe you could rewrite the sentence if you want an exclamation point after Welcome. Perhaps something like: “Welcome! Silk Spa Creations is the site for products made for the Mind, Body and Spirit!"
Although, I’m sure you could come up with something better than this sentence.
Remove the comma after oil. It’s not necessary. Variety is misspelled.
How much do the candles cost? What are the size and weight of the candles? I didn't see this info.
On your description page, “Calming Blend” is misspelled. I also wouldn’t capitalize organic unless it starts a sentence. I’d also write “St Johns wort” as St. John’s Wort. Is the almond you listed an oil? Is it sweet almond oil? If it is an oil, I’d suggest you either write it lower case as you did with the olive oil or capitalize olive oil to make it consistent. I noticed that you capitalized most of the essential oils but didn’t capitalize damiana, rosemary, rose attar or clary sage. The damiana and rosemary - are they oils, extracts or herbs in your candles? I didn’t find these additives stated very clearly.
I think it's fantastic that you've got this site now and best success for this new endeavor.
Your site is very professional looking and I like the pics. Very nice especially the one of the amber bottle, massage stones and what looks like a rosemary sprig. Your choice of scents sound wonderful. I was also impressed that you filled in an "About Us" section and included a picture. I distrust sites that don't have info under the "About Us" section. Of course, this is just me. Maybe other people don't care. The picture is a good touch because it makes me feel like I'd be ordering from a "real" person and not an anonymous source.
Please don't be offended by my nitpicking of your site. I just wanted to point out a few things I noticed. But again, maybe other people don't notice these things.
I noticed some misspellings - irritation and approved. I think "Approved" and "All" should be lower case.
This is just a suggestion. Eliminate the exclamation point after Welcome. It’s redundant since you end the sentence with an exclamation point. Maybe you could rewrite the sentence if you want an exclamation point after Welcome. Perhaps something like: “Welcome! Silk Spa Creations is the site for products made for the Mind, Body and Spirit!"
Although, I’m sure you could come up with something better than this sentence.
Remove the comma after oil. It’s not necessary. Variety is misspelled.
How much do the candles cost? What are the size and weight of the candles? I didn't see this info.
On your description page, “Calming Blend” is misspelled. I also wouldn’t capitalize organic unless it starts a sentence. I’d also write “St Johns wort” as St. John’s Wort. Is the almond you listed an oil? Is it sweet almond oil? If it is an oil, I’d suggest you either write it lower case as you did with the olive oil or capitalize olive oil to make it consistent. I noticed that you capitalized most of the essential oils but didn’t capitalize damiana, rosemary, rose attar or clary sage. The damiana and rosemary - are they oils, extracts or herbs in your candles? I didn’t find these additives stated very clearly.
I think it's fantastic that you've got this site now and best success for this new endeavor.
rubyslippers
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It is a lovely website with great pictures and a very nice layout that is easy to manuever through the site. Nice job.
Thank you so much guys for the advice and tips. I am not offended at all, that was the whole point of me putting my website up, so I can get suggestions and errors, mistakes I might have made on the website, thank you so much, this really helped!
If you have more PLEASE keep them coming!
If you have more PLEASE keep them coming!
