It's cute... does it go with your brand? I'd take it as marketing towards fairly young women.
I worry about the colors... it looks like it has 6 on my monitor. That many colors can add up printing costs.
I think it's a little hard to read (especially if printed in grayscale or on a soap stamp). Losing the top of the "L" in spinel and bottom of the "P" in purple... At a glance, I'm reading it as "purale spinei". The color tone of dark pink in the "i" feels really close to the purple. Maybe if it was lightened??
I don;t sell, so take whatever I have to say with a big, ole heaping grain of salt.
