Proofreading only
5th line needs to have an s added to bar so that it is consistent.
Instead of-sell separately commercially for lotion and skin care products - try sell separately for commercial lotion and skin care products.
change - perhaps make vegan soaps - perhaps to make vegan soaps...
Today I am packaging the last of my soaps and goodies for my big craft fair this weekend. I will be demonstrating soap making on site in my big iron kettle!! It's tons of fun, but rain is predicted!
I do a local Oktoberfest event, and always make beer soap for it. After all, what is Oktoberfest without beer!! One of my favorites is Corona with lime scent, but I don't do that one for Oktoberfest.